Some people feel unsafe when they are in public and at home. What are the possible causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

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A number of people sense that they are threatened while they are on the streets or at their homes. In

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essay I will discuss the reasons of

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continuous feeling of some society members, and

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I will propose some mitigation measures for

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phenomenon.

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with, we have to establish that the main

problem

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which we are discussing is not the actual level of threat, but the perception of

unsafety

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in some people’s minds.

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, the principal reason for

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problem

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is the

information

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that these people get.

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, I think that the media is responsible for

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phenomenon, as it is the main distributor of

information

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, when people spend a significant time watching assault programs on

television they

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television, they

will get the feeling that being attacked at your home or in public is something

probable

capable of being demonstrated or proved

provable

. To solve

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problem

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, I think that governments should guide media companies to emphasize on good news as much as they point out the bad news.

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might give people a better perception of the society that they are living amongst.

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, the excessive feeling of safety might cause people to lose their guards.

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, the suitable mitigation measure should be a balanced

information

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system that points out the pleasant and the unpleasant in a certain country. In conclusion, the perception of

unsafety

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is a real

problem

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caused by emphasizing on dreadful

information

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by the media.

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can be mitigated by balancing

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through pointing out some pleasant news. I think that, if media reflects the

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

of society honestly, by showing the virtuous and the vicious, people will perceive threat more realistically.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Some people feel unsafe when they are in public and at home. What are the possible causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

Your opinion

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agee or disagree?

Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations

Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.