Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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It is commonly suggested that
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tracks should receive more of the government's finances rather than roads. I agree with
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view, as railways do not cause much damage to our environments and
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for longer periods of time. On the one hand, railways are environmental friendly. The tracks are narrow, which reduce the number of trees destroyed to clear ways for its construction and less natural habitats are damaged.
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, a standard highway in Nigeria can accommodate ten
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tracks.
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, if the authorities have spent more on train tracks, our ecosystem will not have been adversely affected, but
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can corrected with
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tracks.
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, railways are durable. Train tracks are not easily damaged by the forces of nature
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as rain and wind, and require only periodic maintenance.
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, the majority of railways in Nigeria were built during the colonial era and are still working effectively.
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, unlike roads, they can be used for a longer time.
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, some people think that more money should be devoted to roads since a greater number of people utilize road transportation.
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may be due to the high number of car owners and traffic congestion in major cities like Beijing and Lagos. They feel that expansions of existing roads and constructions of new ones are needed to address transportation challenges, which require a lot of finances.
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, more intra and inter city
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networks will solve
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problem. In conclusion, the government should devote more financial resources to railways rather than roads because it does not significantly damage our surroundings and it is more durable. Policy makers should be educated on
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view.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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