You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the letter I received from the
bank
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yesterday. The letter stated that $240 was overdrawn from my
account
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and $70 will be deducted as charges for the
overdraft
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. I would like to bring to your notice that I haven't removed any excess cash
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date and so the charges levied on my
account
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is incorrect. Let me explain why my
account
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shows an
overdraft
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of $240.Recently I received a mail from the
bank
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regarding some programming glitches in the
bank
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website and one possible effect of
glitch
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the glitch
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is showing excess withdrawals from personal
bank
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accounts.The
next
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day I
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received a call from the
bank
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assuring that any
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indications of
overdraft
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will be removed automatically,but in my
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the error was not rectified. I would like your kind support to remove the charges on my
account
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for the
overdraft
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which is due to
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a technological
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technological
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glitch rather than me actually withdrawing any excess money. Thank you for your kind consideration. Yours Sincerely Ajmal

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