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Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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With the
development
 of economic and the progress of technology, people’s living level have
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[
has
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had
] been greatly improved. At the same time, The
government
 provides many
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Accept space
[
much] assistance with some professional talents,
such
 as artists. Some people think that all kinds of artists are
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[
Should be] obtained financial help from the
government
, while some others think that
this
 is not necessary. I disagree with
this
 opinion. On the one hand, the
government
 should allocate funds to artists. The reason is that
art
 can improve people's lives. It can not only enrich people's spiritual
world but
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world, but
also
 strengthen the cohesiveness of the people throughout the
country
. Of course,
this
 fund can
also
 better inspire the artist's creative inspiration and make them better to achieve their personal value. The
government
 should develop some
art
-related policies. The forms of
art
 are diverse, and it is difficult for different kinds of artists to succeed, so these artists can better develop and contribute to the
country
 only with the support of the
government
.
On the other hand
, it is not necessary for the
government
 to invest a large amount of money in artists and it should use
this
 money for more important things,
such
 as technology. The
development
 of science and technology can enhance the
country
's overall national strength and the
country
's competitiveness. At the same time, some people are likely to pretend that they are musicians or writers to get help from the state, which will lead to a serious economic burden on the
country
.
As a result
, the
country
’s fiscal spending will increase and income will decrease. In conclusion,
although
 the
government
's help to all kinds of artists has many negative effects,
this
 does not stop the
development
 of
art
. At the same time,
art
 is
also
 very important for the
development
 of today's society. Actually, the success of artists means the
development
 and prosperity of all kinds of
art
.
Therefore
, in order to create a
good
Suggestion
better
 cultural environment, the
country
 should provide assistance to these artists.
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