The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money on education. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed that the Government should allocate more funds to

education

by reducing the

money

spent on

arts

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the arts

. In my opinion, art is an important aspect of human culture and deserves its place in the society. So taking away all the

money

spent on arts and allocating on

education

would harm the artists and

thier

of them or themselves

their

creative talent in the country. Some amount of funds must be spent on arts as it is

important part

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an important part

of our diverse cultures and traditions.

Since

a particular branch of scientific knowledge

Science

, arts

keeps

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keep

our age old customs and practices alive for centuries, it should never be forgotten.

For example

,

archaoelogists

an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture

archaeologists

ecologists

claim that we have learnt about our human civilisations that existed centuries ago, through paintings and artworks.

Furthermore

, if no benefits are given by the authorities, the limitless talent of creative and skilled artists would be harmed and they would prefer taking up normal jobs.

This

indeed would result in loss of creativity and skills

subsequently

resulting in loss of balance between intellectuals and skilled people.

Additionally

, presently the government spends less funds on sectors like art and more on

education

. If these funds were

also

withdrawn

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withdrawn, then

then

art would be most neglected sector in the country and

consequently

will affect the economy.

Hence

, in my opinion, higher budget should be spent on

education

sector rather than

arts but

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arts, but

in no way, all the

money

should be spent on the former. A balance must be achieved by taking into consideration country's current economic situation and needs.

For example

, developing countries might need more workforce to help them in

achieveing

to gain with effort

achieving

higher economic status so arts would not have a major role to play. In conclusion,

although

education

is an important sector, part of

money

should be spent on

arts as well to

Suggestion

the arts as well as

the arts as well to

encorage

contribute to the progress or growth of

encourage

young artists to develop their skills and talents and to strike a

balanace

a state of equilibrium

balance

between people's individual choices.