In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from additional income, other feel they lack support because of their parents' absence

Compared to traditional families, there are a lot of families where

both

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parents are working these days.

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, there are some arguments on which is better for

child

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bearing - is it the

one

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where only

one

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parent

work

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or

both

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parents go out to

work

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? On

one

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side if

both

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mother

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and father go to

work

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to earn money to raise their children, the financial condition of the family becomes better than that of a family where only

one

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parent

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work

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works

.

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, the increase in family income could give a better condition in rearing children;

for instance

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, for their education or for raising them. On the negative, when

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parents' are absent

in

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from

the house, it could result to a lack of support and

care

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for the children

.

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.

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, there is no

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who cares for the

child

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after finishing school. The right solution to

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bearing are different every

decades

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decade

or century. Because the

tendancy

an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others

tendency

to caring a

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are changing

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is changing

based on each social situation. In the traditional period, most of

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took

care

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of their children at home, and their husband went out to

work

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. But we do not need to do

same thing

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the same thing

anymore. There are several

reason

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reasons

why

both

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parents should go out to

work

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.

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, I can insist

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opinion with using only

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reason. In the past, the reason why

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side of parents, especially

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, stayed at home and took

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of their children is that because of lack of opportunity of

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to

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for

women. Women could not get a chance to

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in the past.

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, because of improving women’s rights, many of women, it is called to wife in

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case, can find their job outside of their family. Following

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tendency of

working

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the working mother

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, there

are

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is

a lot of welfare to raise children from government. So people do not need to take

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of their children

with

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by

giving up their job.

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, in the South Korea, there is government baby sitter system. If the

family which

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family, which

has working

mother

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need to baby sitting program, when they go out to

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, government

provide

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provides

the teachers who are educated to

official center

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the official centre

official centre

to take

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of their children and provide the money which is the cost of 70% to hire

baby sitter

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a baby sitter

baby sitters

. And there are a lot of after school program in the

kingdergarden

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and elementary school. And because of

working

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working mothers

the working mother

a working mother

mother

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, family have the additional income. It means that parents can provide better service or opportunity

to

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for

their

chidlren

a young person of either sex

children

.

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parent’s

travail

the act of going from one place to another

travel

does not always bring a lack of support

of

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for

children.

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parent’s working outside of

family

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the family

is

tendency

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the tendency

of

this

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century. And the changing of

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tendency make better policy to raise

chidlren

a young person of either sex

children

. That’s why

both

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parents should go out to

work

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to

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for

with

in

their family.