Certain personal qualities cannot to achieved through university studies.do you agree or disagree

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Certain qualities play important role in
everyone
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everyone's
life
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Howere
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it has become an issue of
debat
a discussion in which reasons are advanced for and against some proposition or proposal
debate
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that these qualities to feasible with the help of university education.I am going to explain my views in my upcoming paragraph
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To commence with
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people can enhance the knowledge with the help of university studies.
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If
a person will go to the University
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they will meet with different types of people as well as they will talk with
other person
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other people
the other person
other persons
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university
the body of faculty and students at a university
University
education
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always provides
lots of information related to the world
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the University, there
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are providing
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different
types of book as well as
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any mechanical or electrical device that transmits or modifies energy to perform or assist in the performance of human tasks
machine
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then
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people will gain
enhance
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enhanced
knowledge

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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