Juvenile crime is attributed to the violence in media. Do you agree or disagree? What are the solutions?

#crime #violence #media

MEDIA PEOPLE DEPICTING MORE

CRIME

ATTEMPTED BY OFFSPRINGS.

THIS

ESSAY CONCUR AND DISCUSS VARIOUS SOLUTIONS TO TACKLE

THIS

PROBLEM. TO START WITH, FROM AN INDIVIDUAL POINT OF VIEW, CHILDREN DO

CRIME

BECAUSE OF LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING ABOUT LIFE. SO, PARENT SHOULD HAVE MORE CONCERN ABOUT THEIR CHILD, DO THEIR PROPER UPBRINGING AND TEACH THEM HOW TO BE A GOOD MEMBER OF THE SOCIETY AS WELL AS A CITIZEN. FOR AN EXAMPLE, MY NEIGHBOR'S SON ATTEMPTED ROBBERY WHEN HE WAS 15 YEAR OLD BECAUSE THEY DID NOT TEACH THEIR OFFSPRING ABOUT AWAFUL BEHAVIOUR AND WHAT ARE THE RESULTS OF COMMITTING OFFENCE.

THUS

, PARENTS SHOULD GUIDE THEM BY BEING FRIENDLY AND OPEN-MINDED WITH TODAY'S GENERATION.

AS A RESULT

, THERE WILL BE DECREASE

CRIME

MOREOVER

, GOVERNMENT

ALSO

DO SOME PROGRAMS LIKE OPEN A REHABILITATION CENTERS IN WHICH OFFENDERS CAN GET INFORMATION ABOUT GOOD BEHAVIOUR AND HOW TO GET RID OF BAD HABITS. TO ELABORATE, AUTHORITY SHOULD IMPLEMENT STRICT RULES LIKE REHABILITATION IS MANDATORY FOR ALL CRIMINALS AND ANY KIND OF CRIMES. FOR AN INSTANCE, IF ONE IS A MURDERER AND OTHER HAVE DONE ROBBERY THAN THERE ARE NO EXEMPTION FOR RUBBERS JUST BECAUSE THEY ARE JUST A THIEF.

THIS

APPROACH ENCOURAGE EXCITED CRIMINALS TO BE A RESPONSIBLE MEMBER OF THE NATION.

IN ADDITION

THIS

ALSO

THERE SHOULD BE SOME RESTRICTIONS FOR MEDIA PEOPLE. TO ILLUSTRATE, LAWS IN WHICH THEY HAVE THE BOUNDARIES AND DUTIES MENTION. SO THAT, THEY KNOW WHAT

NEWS

THEY MAY PUBLISH AND WHAT NOT. FOR AN EXAMPLE, IF THEY GET A

NEWS

SUCH

AS, ONE SCHOOLER HAS ATTEMPTED THEFT.

THEN

, THE MEDIA UNALLOWED TO TELECAST

THIS

NEWS

ON THE TELEVISION. BECAUSE IT WILL INFLUENCE MANY OTHER STUDENTS TOO. BUT IF THEY GET THE INFORMATION as RAPE HAS ATTEMPTED BY 25-YEAR-OLD BOY,

THEN

THEY SHOULD SHOW THE

NEWS

BECAUSE

THIS

MAKES PUBLIC AWARE OF CURRENTS SITUATION. TO SUM UP,

HOWEVER

, MEDIA SHOULD indeed HAVE RIGHT TO PUBLISH ANY

CRIME

. BUT, I THINK WITH JUVENILE THEY SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL ABOUT WHEN AND WHAT TO SHOW. EVERYONE IS RESPONSIBLE TO MAKE SOME CHANGES IN THE COUNTRY.

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