It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying the

history

of their hometown is for sure an indispensable part of

school’s curriculum

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the school’s curriculum

a school’s curriculum

during students’ early education. I believe having thorough insights into what happened in the past at one’s locality

develops

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developed

his patriotism.

For example

, children of primary and secondary schools in my village are taught about how their ancestors defended their land against outside intruders and reclaimed sovereignty.

Therefore

, those young children would take pride in their origin and treasure the life they know as it is today.

Additionally

, I think it is not only students’

privilege but

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privilege, but

also

their responsibility to know about their own

history

to understand their hometown’s traditional values and identity. From another angle, learning about world

history

shares equal importance just as local one.Acquiring knowledge about the world’s past events equips students with a more well-rounded perspective of life. Lessons about the World War or Feminism protest against women’s abuse and discrimination would help those learners enhance their understanding about various aspects of the world.

Furthermore

, I think that being taught about the other countries’ historical backgrounds would benefit young learners in their future career. Students who accumulate knowledge of

this

particular field at an early age would possess a golden selling point to work for foreign enterprises, especially those who highly value company culture like Japan. In conclusion, I believe the significance of domestic and international

history

cannot be brought into comparison to see which one is more necessary because they have distinctively equal meanings to children.