Some people think that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some believe that
team
sports is essential in determining the success
of a child's career, others feel this
is not true. This
essay will discuss both opinions and my thoughts will be provided at the end.
Team
sports teach children how to work
with other people, which is a useful skill for many careers. Team
sports show children how they need to work
together in order to succeed. Many lines of work
require cooperating with one another in order to achieve a common goal. For example
, many companies have yearly team
-building activities to improve the work
of their staff. Therefore
, team
sports are useful in teaching how working together leads to success
.
In contrast
, individual sports teach children how to not be reliant on others. By not depending on other people, self motivation and a competitive streak is encouraged
which are both important skills to advance in a career. Those involved in Suggestion
are encouraged
team
sports, for example
cricket, are less motivated to pull their weight because their team
members can pick them up if they fail. Additionally
, people who play individual sports have shown to have better work
ethic which results in more promotions. For this
reason, individual sports promote independence, and in turn, success
.
In conclusion, while team
sports teach children how to interact with others, individual sports are more beneficial as it shows how to not be dependent on others which is better in career-wise. Therefore
, in my opinion, team
sports are not as useful for career success
compared to individual sports.Submitted by dashbhana on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite