1. Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than having free education provided by the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that the students are the ones who should entirely be responsible for their
college
fees and that the
government
should not be involved in
this
matter. I strongly disagree with
this
statement as I believe that the
government
does play a role in an indi
vdual's pat
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individual's
h to higher education for the following reasons.
Firstly
, not all children can afford to pay university fees because of their financial back
gorund.
a person's social heritage: previous experience or training
background
In other words
, there may be bright students who more than willing to attend university but because of acquiring less or no bank savings ther
e dre
of them or themselves
their
ams can be hindered. One of my friends,
for example
, was only able to save a very little amount of
money
through his part-time job to pay for his tuition fees. Ulti
maltely, he
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Ultimately
had to drop out of
college
and give up on is bach
elor's
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the bachelor's degree dream
a bachelor's degree dream
degree
dream as he could not pay off the debt.
This
clearly could have been avoided if the
government
was invl
oved and
connected by participation or association or use
involved
had taken up the responsibility to pay off a talented student's educational dream.
Secondly
, we all know that
college
fees cost a lifetime. To be more specific, I strongly believe that a person's hard earned
money
should not be purely spent on his/her
degree
fees.
For example
, one of my cousins had only enough
money
to spend on her tuition fees that she had earned during her internship. Because of
this
reason, she hard
ly was abl
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has hardly been
had hardly been
e to take care of her daily expenses
such
as pay for rent, amenities, food etc. If the
government
had taken responsibility of her tuition fees, she would have been able to concentrate on her other expenses and she would not have been in a position to borrow
money
from her frei
nds.
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
To summarize, I personally believe that it is the
government
's duty to take resp
onsiblity of
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
unfortunate students'
degree
fees as not everyone can afford
college
with their own savings and not all of one's savings should be spent on his/her
college
degree
fees.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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