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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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The number of litters in the society has increased significantly over the
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 decade.
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 essay will discuss the main two causes of
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 issue and possible solutions for the authorities to solve it. The two primary reasons that directly contribute to
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 issue are the fast-trend industry and the unnecessary packaging for a product.
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, we are currently living in the century where everything changes so quickly. Every year, there will always be new technologies, fashions and items that cause the society to always purchase the new version, even though their current item is still functional.
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, many companies often
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 non-reusable items to package their goods. According to 'The Economist' magazine, the Unilever company uses more than 10,000 of
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 annually for their products, which contributes to almost 60% of litter in the community.
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, fast-trend industry and unused packaging are the major reason
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 the rise in rubbish.
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, the government should
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 their role to reduce
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 issue by banning non-recycled goods and raising awareness within the community. As
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 is the major contribution to litter, they need to stop every company from producing unnecessary packaging.
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, in 2015, the Armsterdam' authorities established a regulation where companies are required to
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 carton boxes
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 of
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, since it can be recycled easily. In 2016, they have reduced the amount of litters by 70% annually.
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, they can
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 their platform to raise awareness in the society through advertisement and campaign.
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, the governments have a great platform that can help to protect the environment from rubbish. In conclusion,
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 the increase of rubbish is due to the fast-trend industry and company's packaging, the government can prevent
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 problem by raising awareness and banning the
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 of
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 in the community.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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