You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Ms Jane, I am

you

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your

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new

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neighbour, I just moved to the building

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to yours. I am a teacher and my husband, a lawyer. We have a 7 years old daughter whose birthday

about

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is about

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two

weks

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weeks

from now. For her

brithday

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birthday

, we are planning to throw a little party to

celeberate

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celebrate

and I really would appreciate your presence. Here are a few details about the party, the event is scheduled to hold between 2pm and 5pm on the 27th October. There would be a lot of food, drinks , games and music for the children.

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, we have arranged for a

sound-proof

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soundproof

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cover at the entrance of our flat in other to minimise noise

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, we would be very decent about the even.

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,adults would enjoy some relaxing moments and bond at the event while the children have fun. I apologise in advance for any

inconvenicies

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inconveniencies

inconveniences

this

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might cause you. I look forward to having you at the event as I am sure

this

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will afford us some time together. Yours faithfully, Motolani Johnson.

Wed Oct 23 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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