You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Ms Jane, I am your new neighbour and I live in the building

to yours. I live with my husband who is a lawyer and my

7 year old

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daughter - Diane, who will be turning eight

month , and we're planning to throw a small party. I really would appreciate your presence. Here are a few details about the party, the event is scheduled to hold between 2pm and 5pm on the 15th October.Alongside food and drinks, there would be games and music at the party,

although

we have arranged for a

sound-proof

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cover at the entrance of our flat.

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, adults would enjoy some relaxing moments at the event amidst soft music and drinks, while the children have fun. I apologise in advance for any inconvenience

this

might cause you, and I look forward to having you at the event as I am sure

this

will afford us some time to meet each other properly. Yours faithfully, Motolani Johnson.

Submitted by motolanid on Wed Oct 23 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

164 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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