Many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days in responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. They argued that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

Nowadays it is well known that the

violence

in films and television has become increasingly when it comes to violent crimes between teenagers categories.

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matter r

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rises

the question whether it is only o

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for

the

government

to be b

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blamed

for the

violence

and what can be done about

this

issue. P

ersonally I

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Personally, I

strongly agree with

this

idea that the

government

h

ave

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has

a major responsibility in controlling and reducing the level of

violence

permitted by movies and televisions. Indeed the children and teenagers are swayed by the actors and VIP celebrities to play and imitate their favourite personality which lead to

violence

and aggressive behaviour

.

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.

On the other hand

, the parents play an equal role as the

government

regarding the limited access of their children, so they should control and interdict their children to watch programs with high content of

violence

.

Moreover

, in the

last

y

ears the statistics

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years, the statistics

s

hows

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show

a huge amount of

violence

between teenagers,

for e

xample some

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example, some

of the school boys has taken the role of Jackie Chan personally and committed a

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acts

of

violence

between their peers.

On the other hand

the children should be encouraged to be more involved in sport activities and educational clubs

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,

thus

they won’t have too much time to waste on movies or televisions. From my point of view, I don’t agree with the people who think that it is only the

government

responsibility to b

anned

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ban

the movie or the televisions and I believe it is p

arents

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parents'

parent's

duty to control and teach their children to watch educational programs

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Therefore

the

violence

and crime among youth will be reduced.