Many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days in responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. They argued that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

Nowadays it is well known that the

violence

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in films and television has become increasingly when it comes to violent crimes between teenagers categories.

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the question whether it is only o

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for

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to be b

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blamed

for the

violence

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and what can be done about

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issue. P

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Personally, I

strongly agree with

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idea that the

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has

a major responsibility in controlling and reducing the level of

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permitted by movies and televisions. Indeed the children and teenagers are swayed by the actors and VIP celebrities to play and imitate their favourite personality which lead to

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and aggressive behaviour

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, the parents play an equal role as the

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regarding the limited access of their children, so they should control and interdict their children to watch programs with high content of

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.

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years, the statistics

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show

a huge amount of

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between teenagers,

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example, some

of the school boys has taken the role of Jackie Chan personally and committed a

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acts

of

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between their peers.

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the children should be encouraged to be more involved in sport activities and educational clubs

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,

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they won’t have too much time to waste on movies or televisions. From my point of view, I don’t agree with the people who think that it is only the

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responsibility to b

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ban

the movie or the televisions and I believe it is p

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parents'

parent's

duty to control and teach their children to watch educational programs

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the

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and crime among youth will be reduced.