It is common aspiration among many young people to run their own business rather than work for an employer. Do you think the disadvantages of working for yourself outweigh the advantages ?

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TODAY'S YOUNGSTERS ARE HIGHLY ENERGETIC AND INNOVATIVE. MYRIAD OF YOUTH ENCOARAGED TO BE SELF EMPLOYED AFTER HEARING THE STORY OF A SUCCESSFUL YOUNG BUSINESSMEN BECAUSE OF THE NUMEROUS MERITS OF DOING OWN
BUSINESS
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THAN DEMERITS.
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, I DO NOT THINK SO THAT CONS OF SEL EMPYOEEMENT CAN OUTWEIGH THE PROS.
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE MAIN ADVANTAGE OF BEING EMPLYOEER AND HOW DISADVANTAGE ARE AT LEAST CONCERN IN FRONT OF FAMILY VALUES. ON THE
ONE
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HAND, THE MAJOR BENEFIT OF DOING
BUSINESS
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IS THAT IT GIVES A FLEXIBILITY IN WORKING
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AND PLACE. AND
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, THAT PERSON IS NOT BONDED TO OPT FOR WORK ON FIXED
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RATHER
ONE
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HAS A RIGHT TO OPERATE THE
BUSINESS
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FROM ANYWHERE AND ANYTIME AT HIS CONVENIENCE.
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, WORKERS SHOULD BE PUNCTUAL IN THEIR
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AND WORK AS THEY ARE BEING PAID FOR FIXED HOURS WORKS.
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,
ONE
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OF MY FRIEND OWN'S A STATIONARY SHOP. SO WHENEVER HE GETS EMERGENCY WHETHER PERSONAL OR PROFESSIONAL, HE USED TO TAKE A DAY OFF. I THINK
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, PEOPLE FIND EASY AND MORE FLEXIBLE TO OWNA
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THAN BEING EMPLOYEE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
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, WORKING FOR SELF GIVES MORE BURDEN AND RESPONSIBILTY THAN WORKING FOR AN EMPLOYER.
ONE
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HAS TO WORK MORE THAN 9 HOURS PER DAY TO INCREASE THE PROFITS AND EXPANSION OF
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.
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LEAVES A LESS
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FOR THEM TO COMMUNICATE WITH THEIR FAMILY AND FRIENDS. AND
AS A RESULT
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LACK OF
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FOR CONVERSATION BUILD A BRIDGE IN BETWEEN THEM.
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, AS FAR AS THEY ARE AVAILABLE DURING NEEDED
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,
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SMALL PROBLEMS CAN BE NEGOTIATE.
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, A SUCCESSFUL BUSINESSMAN TOLD IN THE INTERVIEW THAT HE USED TO HAVE PERSONAL ISSUES A LOT BUT AT THE END EVERYTHING WORKS OUT WITH PROPER UNDERSTANDINGS. IN CONCLUSION, WHETHER THE INDIVIDUAL IS SELF-EMPLOYED OR EMPLYEE, EVERY FAMILY NEEDS SUPPORT, AFFECTION AND
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. AND
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REQUIREMENT, A
BUSINESS
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OWNER CAN FULLFILL AT THE BEST.
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, NEW GENERATION ARE MORE INFLUENCED WITH OPERATINNG
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AS OWNER THAN WORKING FOR THE COMPANY.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aspiration
  • entrepreneur
  • flexibility
  • decision-making
  • financial rewards
  • personal fulfillment
  • challenges
  • financial risk
  • invested capital
  • cash flow
  • guaranteed income
  • work-life balance
  • responsibility
  • pressure
  • burnout
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