Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential.

It is irrefutable that both

scientists

and

politicians

have made great contributions to

the

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societies worldwide and it would be difficult to say whose influence is greater. In the following paragraphs, I

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highlight the role of both,

politicians

and

scientists

in our lives.

Politicians

are elected by citizens to work for the betterment of the masses by enforcing regulations to maintain social harmony and law and order in the country. They represent the common man and do their best so that no one is devoid of their fundamental rights. They

also

represent their countries in matters where global

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is needed. They have the power to change the standing of their nation in the whole

world

.

For example

, the economic policies of our Prime Minister, Manmohan Singh have brought India way up in the eyes of the whole

world

.

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the

contribution

of

scientists

cannot be

under estimated

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. They have made great progress in the field of medicine. Today, there is a cure for many fatal diseases

such

as cancers.

Scientists

all over the

world

are toiling

whole-heartedly

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to find a cure for problems

such

as AIDS. It is the

contribution

of

scientists

that we have electricity and the automobile. The

contribution

of

scientists

in the field of communication has shrunk the whole planet Earth into a global village. The satellite TV and the internet have brought the

world

into the common man’s bedroom. Because of

scientists

’

contribution

, education has reached the remotest corners of the

world

, thereby reducing the gap between the rich and the poor.

Scientists

are working on fighting global warming. They are working on space tourism and exploring other planets for evidence of life. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that no doubt,

politicians

are very important for people but the

contribution

of

scientists

is much more. They have converted yesterday’s fiction into today’s reality.