Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.  Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is thought by some that the media photographers should cease stalking celebrities, while some school of thought believe it is a norm. In my opinion, I consider that strict laws should be implemented to enable restrictions of media personnel. On the one hand, some people believe that famous stars should not be bombarded by photographers in their private space and I agree.
In other words
, these icons are human beings and as humans we are prone to seek for territory. When external forces breach into our space,
this
causes an agitation and might
aswell
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as well
destabilise the normal function and way of life of
such
person.
For example
, in 1978 Micheal Jackson who is a famous pop singer
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
suicide because of the access of information that the media had in photos and was published on all news journals.
In addition
,
government
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the government
governments
should implement stringent policies and rules that will limit the access of visual artist and restrict them from
posing
(American football) a play that involves one player throwing the ball to a teammate
passing
into the secret lives of these celebs.
On the other hand
, others are of the opinion that the attention of these photo artist is bound to occur.
This
is because the more known and famous an individual becomes, the higher the level of interest garnered from the public view.
Consequently
,
as a result
of
this
, every action and steps taken by a prominent individual. Fans, supporters as well as competitors will be interested on
such
a person.
For instance
, over 50 media power houses in United States of America pulled the attention of all their
jounalist
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journalists
journalist
and photographers to focus on Justin Bieber, a
muscian
someone who plays a musical instrument (as a profession)
musician
mission
during is
relationship
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a relationship
with Selena Gomez.
Furthermore knowing
Accept comma addition
Furthermore, knowing
the secret lives of these celebrities are the high points of their fans and as
such
, more media focus will be on them. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion. I believe that laws and policies should be implemented to guard the private lives of celebrities from journalist and photo storytellers.
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  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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