It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.

Talent and success are always interlinked. Some say people are born with certain talents in fields like music and sport, other say
any one
any person
anyone
can be taught to become a good sports person or
musician
Suggestion
a musician
. In
this
essay I will discuss both the views and state my own opinion. Some people are born talented, we can find
such
people in many fields, especially in the fields of music and sport. Beethoven is a known genius in the field of music. He was able to compose a symphony at the age of 8, without any formal training. Indian chess champion Viswanathan Anand was a born genius and was
phenominal
of or relating to a phenomenon
phenomenal
phenomena
in the field of Chess from his childhood. People like them are extremely talented and are
also
very successful in their respective fields.
On the contrary
, there are people who are not born talented, but acquired the skill after rigorous
practice
. Writer Malcolm Gladwell explained
this
phenomenon as 10000 hour rule. He argues that any
great
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growth
in their field before achieving something worthwhile would have put in 10000 hours of
practice
. He cites the example of Bill gates and how his
practice
on school computers from his childhood helped him in writing code for windows later in his life. Many famous sports persons like Sachin Tendulkar, Micheal Jordan and others have
also
said in various interviews that
practice
is what helped them achieve
this
immense success and stardom. To conclude, in my opinion talent can be both innate or acquired. People in both categories have achieved success. It is all up to the individual of how they can shape their own destiny.
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