Nowadays environmental problems are too big for individual countries or people to solve. We have reached the stage where we need cooperation on an international level to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that to solve the climate issue is an enormous task for the individual countries and people. We have to take the help of each other to solve

this

problem.

This

essay completely disagrees with

this

statement because we need to take the responsibility on individual basis of our

environment

and plant more trees as much as we can.

To begin

with, one of the best

way

Suggestion

ways

to make our

environment

better is that we need to take the responsibility of our surroundings. We have to use the proper garbage

system

to throw our waste, and states need

make

Suggestion

to make

the proper garbage

system

and force people to follow that

system

, and take the action against whom, who does not follow the guidelines of the government. And states should

also

make the proper recycling

system

as well, so the waste does consume in the betterment of the society.

For example

, there is report that

tells

express in words

says

that if we just take care of our surrounding it will be enough for making the whole

environment

better.

Secondly

, we need to plant trees as much as we can, and spread the awareness about the merits of planting

tree

Suggestion

trees

. Trees reduce the temperature of the

environment

where they planted, and

also

provide us oxygen and fresh

environment

. They prevent us to become the victim of heatstroke,

thus

we need to aware people about

this

For instance

, after heatstroke hit Pakistan in 2015, Current Prime Minister of Pakistan, Imran Khan,

the person or persons that; the one that

who

was at that time not the Prime Minister, initiate the

compaign

a race between candidates for elective office

campaign

of 1 billion trees in one of the states of Pakistan that helped a lot in the betterment of the

environment

in that state. In conclusion, some believe that we should cooperate each other to solve environmental problem,

however

, I think that individual efforts can

also

bring the change in our

environment

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

311 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

global warming
climate change
cross-border impacts
unified global response
biodiversity loss
geopolitical boundaries
international cooperation
renewable energy projects
collective responsibility
environmental degradation
international agreements
scope and impact
environmental challenges
policymaking
plastic pollution
marine environments

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