Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

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Happiness
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cannot be measured in terms of wealth. I strongly agree with
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statement and feel that there are many factors that can make a
person
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happy other than money. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will explore about my views regarding
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with,
happiness
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is an emotion and
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, is not quantifiable. The situations to be happy for differs from
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to
person
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as
happiness
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is relative.
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, it becomes difficult to define
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.
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, a rich individual won’t be concerned about a small amount of money, whereas a poor individual will be happy with that particular amount of money. Generally, people tend to feel joyful, is when they are satisfied, fulfilled or have achieved something.
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, a student scoring grade ‘A’ in an exam would definitely feel delighted about his achievement.
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,
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can be found in simpler things, as small as a walk with friends which can make some people cheerful, but sometimes even big achievements doesn’t make people happy,
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, an individual will not be happy even after receiving a promotion as he doesn’t enjoy the work he is doing. My experience of achieving
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is setting a short attainable goal on a weekly basis and work toward achieving it.
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, one can
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make long term goals along with the short one and work hard to achieve it. Accomplishing
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goals can make me happy.
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, different factors can make people feel happy, since it is a subjective feeling. To conclude, as
happiness
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is relative it is very difficult to predict, what and how things will make a
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happy.
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, specific aspect which can make them cheerful are the things and the situations they desire at that moment of time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subjective
  • universally
  • cultural differences
  • psychological factors
  • satisfaction with life
  • emotional balance
  • personal achievements
  • social connections
  • fulfilling relationships
  • sense of belonging
  • sense of purpose
  • physical health
  • well-being
  • financial stability
  • mindfulness
  • gratitude
  • positive thinking
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