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Today the importance of recycling is not deniable among societies.
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, in my view, public participation in separating domestic
rubbish
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to reuse some valuable materials is not as it should be.
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, I suppose regulating new rules that compel people to participate is a prominent
solution
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. To address the problem of inadequate public participation, we need to consider the reasons behind the reluctance of people.
currently
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Currently
, governments or municipalities determine definite instructions for classifying
rubbish
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according to their type. Most of the time, these instructions are perplexing.
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, some people are unwilling to involve in recycling programs.
For example
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, in our area,
this
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structure is specified by which the resident not only must separate glass, metal, paper from each other, but
also
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sorting plastics in terms of type A, b and C plastics. Apart from that carrying out
this
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structure precisely is laborious and time-consuming, several dwellers,
in particular
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, the elderly
can not
can not
cannot
even distinguish between stuff
such
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as glass and plastics.
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, recycling is rarely done in most
district
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districts
.
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, in my opinion, the unwillingness of citizens to
participation
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participate
due to the complexity of the recycling process is not acceptable, while our environment confronts serious problems that are caused by the enormous amount of
rubbish
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in particular
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recyclable materials that most of them are not decomposed for a decade at minimum.
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setting laws and fines can not eradicate
this
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selfish and indolent manner of
human
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humanity
, I suppose at least can be
successful
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a successful solution
solution
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to some extent.
when
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When
contravention of recycling programming has own cost
,
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,
in people view, It seems that recycling is less time-consuming and more reasonable compared to before regulating.
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, they will more involve in order to prevent the penalized cost.
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, Take above example again, in the case of regulating, due to the fines there is
comparatively more motivation
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the comparatively more motivation
for families to learn
process
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the process
a process
of recycling. To conclude, unfortunately, our environment
is being devastating
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is devastated
is devastating
has devastated
as a repercussion of our boundless
rubbish
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, yet we are not paying enough attention to
this
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issue and its possible
solution
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such
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as recycling.
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, it seems that
with
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by
establishing new rules we can reach a proper
solution
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.
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  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
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  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
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