Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problem as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statesman?

Surely, speaking and living in a foreign
country
has its own setback as people can face social and practical problem. I agree with
this
statement, but those who came to
foreign
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a foreign country
foreign countries
country
must respect their norms and language so that mutual respect can be maintained. In my opinion, social problem can be faced by
people mostly
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people, mostly
when they started to live in a new
country
. Because of completely new language, communicating with them can be too much tough and time consuming.
As a result
,
new comers
any new participant in some activity
newcomers
can face problem in a social gathering which may
leads
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lead
to communication gap.
For example
, in some
culture
like; English
are
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is
very polite in their way of communication and
speaking which
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speaking, which
can be completely different in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture
. So,
therefore
, a person who does not know the particular norms or
culture
might offend the people surrounding him
.
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.
Another
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Other
drawbacks of being in a foreign
country
, can be practical,
for example
; job searching. Restaurant,
company
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a company
which
need
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needs
to communicate with customer more frequently, may not hire employees who are foreign. As the local customs and rules are not too much aligned
to
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with
their own
culture
and
therefore
, foreign
employs
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
often do not know how to mix with local in critical situation. On top of that, customers
also
find it too much difficult for them to interact with foreigners, especially the people who don’t know their custom very well. In short, people can have lots of misconceptions when they come in foreign countries and not everything they heard i
s true b
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true, but
ut in my opini
o
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,
n,they must respec
t other
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other cultures
the other culture
culture
and rules
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