The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the lifestyles of international communities are accessible information
due to
the ease of travel and media coverage.
Although
they can lead to inappropriate cultural absorption, I believe that the merits of getting informed about the way people in other countries live outweigh the drawbacks for some reasons.
Firstly
, the spreading of information about how other individuals live globally will increase the possibility of
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cultural homogenization. If a local community consumes news which continuously covers relatively liberal countries, they will adopt new norms which are not fully appropriate to their initial upbringings and local circumstances. One clear example is how teenagers in places which honour politeness and traditional values at
first,
for instance
, Indonesia, are affected by Western media and
subsequently
imitate the American way of expressing emotions and thoughts,
such
as public display of affection from unmarried couples.
This
will potentially clear the original culture which respects privacy and politeness in public.
On the other hand
, by knowing about how other citizens live in different nations through travelling or reading mass media, people will learn about honourable habits in other cultures.
Subsequently
, if they believe that
such
habits or values are proven to be beneficial, they will try to instil them in their own lives. The cleanliness of Japanese towns,
for instance
, has impressed many people and is contended to be the result of collective discipline traits.
Therefore
, upon visiting Japan or witnessing
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positive publicity, habitats of other places will be inspired to be as disciplined as the Japanese.
To conclude
, there can be no doubt that receiving details about global lifestyles is undeniable,
whereas
this
potentially brings some advantages and disadvantages for society.
However
, I staunchly endorse the benefits of learning positive habits from other citizens' ways of living,
while
at the same time taking unsuitable content from other parts of the world with a grain of salt.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • multiculturalism
  • cultural preservation
  • sustainability
  • mass media
  • cosmopolitanism
  • global village
  • tourism industry
  • cultural assimilation
  • cultural erosion
  • carbon footprint
  • ethnocentrism
  • cultural sensitivity
  • exchange programs
  • cultural heritage
  • xenophobia
  • cultural diversity
  • cultural awareness
  • exploitation
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