Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future society while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

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Robots are likely to become more prevalent in people's daily lives just like other technological devices. People have different views about whether
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change would be beneficial, or it could impact our lives in a bad way. Personally, I would side with those who believe that robots' role could be detrimental. On the one hand, technological developments, including robots, would make a great contribution to societies.
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, they could operate in locations that humans cannot reach or could be dangerous for them. They could be sent to outer space to explore the other planets or
could be replace
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could replace
humans to do mining in order to reduce the risk of getting killed or injured for individuals,
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, one of the impressive roles that robots play
is providing
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provides
more free time by helping in manual daily works
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as washing, cleaning and shopping.
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, since they do what they are asked to do without any complaint, and are available 24/7, people can spend their spare time on reading or exercising which brings about personal growth.
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, there are several underlying reasons why robots could have adverse effects on our lives in the coming years. Robots could change the workforce's structure. Humans would be replaced by machines which will increase unemployment rate.
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, societies will suffer from poverty and crime.
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, these human-made machines can only do what they are
planned
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planning
to do.
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, they could make mistakes while working which not only could have negative impacts but
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could jeopardize people's lives.
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, robots are used in hospitals as nurses, which could put individuals' lives in danger by injecting wrong medicine. In conclusion,
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robots could become dominant in the future due to the benefits they offer, I think their existence would have disastrous consequences for societies.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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