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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving school at 16 or 18 to work instead of going to university?

#school #work #university
In my opinion, leaving
school
 at 16 or 18 to
work
instead
 of going to university is not good
to
Suggestion
for
 young people. The good
work
 with good pay
always need
Suggestion
always needs
high
Suggestion
higher
education
. The young people can only get a
job
 in a factory or some simple
work
 after
they
of them or themselves
their
 high
school
. They can not get a good
job
 as a lawyer or a doctor. Some people leaving
school
 at 16 or 18 to
work
. They can live by
themselfes
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
. When they worked for a long time, they will find some problems which come from the low
education
. They realized that they need to go back to
school
. The university
education
 is helpful. I went to
work
 when I finished my
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
. I
teached
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
arties
a skilled worker who practices some trade or handicraft
artisan
 design for two years. At that moment, I found I need to learn more. So I went back to university for my master’s degree.
Work
 will make us realize our shortcomings. All kinds of jobs are needed in society. Not only a simple
job
. If young people just want to have a
job
, they can leave
school
 at 16 or 18. But if they want to have a good
job
, I’m afraid they need more technology and
education
. With the development of society. Manual worker will be replaced by machines. More and more manual workers will lose their jobs. Only highly educated jobs will not be replaced.
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