Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that artists should not be supported by the state because supporting them is just a waste of financial resources and the government should invest it into more useful things. While some say that artists do everything for

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themselves, not

for the

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, I believe that they are the brand ambassador of the

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. On the one hand, artists perform to earn the fame and money for themselves, they do not care about the

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.

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, the government should spend that money into the things that can bring more benefits in the

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rather spending it on artists.

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as, reforms in education system may bring revolutionary change in the

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of the

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.

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, a recent research revealed that 80% of the developing countries can secure their

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future just

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future, just

by investing more money in their education sector.

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, I do not agree with

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view because it is not the proper way to secure the

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, artists are the brand ambassador of the

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. They represent the soft image of the

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to the world. And people know their

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just by knowing them.

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, Atif Aslam is a leading singer in Pakistan and people know him all over the world and because of knowing him, they got to know that there is a

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exist named Pakistan. I believe that the state should encourage artists, because they have the power that can attract people from all over the globe towards the

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. In conclusion,

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many say that

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the artist

ought not be encouraged by the state, I would say because they represent the

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’s positive image to the world,

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, they must be appreciated by the government.