Some people think that children should receive formal training at schools on how to be a good parents in future. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is believed by some people that students should be taught on parenting skills in the school, so as to become a good father and mother when they are grown up.
This
essay disagrees with the education of
such
trade because it may not be appropriate
age
level and schools are meant to achieve at different objective for the students. Parenting is an unfathomable phenomena and maybe to diverse subject for adolescents in the schools. It is a very heavy topic to be
onboarded
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on-board
embedded
on the nascent students
,
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,
in other
words students
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words, students
of
age
15 to 16 years may not be mentally ready or grasp the complete knowledge on it.
Furthermore
,
this
may
in still
impart gradually
instill
fear in many and may cause harm to their fragile brains and thought process.
For example
, as per World health organisation guidelines, it is recommended that not to expose children to
such
topic till the
age
of 18 years and it
also
suggested that, an ideal
age
for inducing awareness of future life is after school life.
Hence
, student are still naïve to understand the complexity of parenthood at
such
a tender
age
. Apart from
this
, if courses of
such
nature are being introduced in the institutes,
then
the whole goal of schools may be diluted, as a fundamental function of it is to imbibe students with knowledge of science, mathematics and cultural life.
For example
, it
is been observed
Suggestion
has been observed
that many teachers are themselves young parents and may not have
expertise
Suggestion
the expertise
to deal with the subject.
Thus
, the whole idea of the course may not be achieved and can cause disturbances in the study of other fields. In conclusion, the complexity behind understanding parenthood is huge and not suitable to be taught at tender ages.
Also
, it may diverge schools from performing its main function.
Hence
, I am not in agreement of teaching a parenting course at school level.
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