An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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I hope
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letter finds you in
pink
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of health. I'm on cloud nine
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when I got to know that you are visiting Ontario. With that said, let me help you with your travel itinerary and a few suggestions. If you haven't yet booked your accommodations
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your flight tickets, don't worry that's totally fine. Let me speak to my friend who has
beautifully
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furnished basement where you could stay for two weeks. There are some Airbnb properties too, but it will not only cost you an arm and a leg but
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far
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away from tourist attractions. By staying at my
friend'
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place , you will be in the heart of Toronto
city
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, where you can feel the downtown vibes.
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is nothing different that other metro cities, but some
breath taking
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breathtaking
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adventures of skiing
at
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Blue
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Mountains and sky-walking on the roofs of CN towers will be a memorable experience. For your
two-weeks
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two-week
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holiday, if time permits, I could drive you to the Niagra
falls
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, where you could see
US-Canada
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the US-Canada
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border separated by one of the worlds of the world, Niagra
fall
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. Talking about the weather here, on your arrival there will be light
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.
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, get your
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winter gear
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along with
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mufflers, gloves and snow boots. There aren't any chances of pouring, but just to be on the safer side, you can get your umbrella. Drenching in the
rains
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and being under the weather is not a good idea. See you soon !
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single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.
logical structure
Ensure that all ideas are logically connected with appropriate linking words.
complete response
The letter effectively addresses all parts of the task with clear advice and information.
suitable writing tone
The friendly tone of the letter is appropriate for writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
The letter opens and closes with warm and appropriate expressions.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • attractions
  • landmarks
  • cultural events
  • outdoor activities
  • regional cuisine
  • seasonal weather
  • suitable clothing
  • local recommendations
  • hospitality
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