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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some people would argue that the main reason for learning another
country
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's
language
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 is because they want to
visit
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 the
country
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, while others think that they have other motives to learn it.
This
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 essay agrees with the former statement and will discuss how learning a foreign
language
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 is only beneficial if we have an intention to
visit
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 the region where it is used and,
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, it is not needed. On the one hand, learning the
language
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 of a
country
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 which people plan to
visit
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 can help them during their stay in the
country
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. The vast majority of people of a
country
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 do not speak other than their official
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,
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, understanding it to a certain degree can help traveller in their daily lives. If people can ask the local people for direction and time, it will avoid them getting lost in the visited nations.
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, I learned some French words before my
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 to France and it had helped me to navigate from a hotel to the Eiffel tower. In my opinion, learning how to speak to locals before visiting a state can safe visitors from getting lost.
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, learning the
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 of a nation that a person does not plan to
visit
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 is a waste of time. When a person does not have a motive in studying a
language
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, the person will not grasp the skill.
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 is because learning a
language
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 needs immersion so that the learner is forced to hear and speak in it.
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, I took a German course in university just for accompanying a friend and,
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, I have never been able to understand the
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. In my opinion, learning a foreign
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 without motivation to
visit
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 a
country
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 where the locals speak the
language
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 does not provide benefits to the learner. In conclusion, studying a foreign
language
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 is only beneficial when people have the intention to
visit
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 a
country
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 where it is spoken. Without any intention to have an opportunity to speak to the locals, learning a foreign
language
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 is useless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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