you have seen an advertisement of Australian magazines for someone to live with family in six-months and look after their six-years old child write a letter 1- Explain why you would like this 2- Give detail of why you are suitable person to employ 3- Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir and Madam I am writing
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your family starting from the beginning of
next
month. Please let me elaborate
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reason why I am
suitable
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person for
this
I am
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graduate student that studied the Nursery course which especially majored in Childcare from Melbourne University and looking for a short term job in the near future. I am currently staying alone; I would like to
apply
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this
child care job
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particular knowledge
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I have learned at School will support me complete the job in
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way. I experienced in
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the training
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course and volunteer program which was organized by
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. I have leant to keep children engaged in
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of their parents and follow the prescribed schedule by guardians.
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, I am tidy, sincere, patient and hard working. When I feel free I spend my time
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reading
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of
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children
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to help me collect more knowledge of childcare
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you have any questions, you can mail me at [email protected] or call at 445566677 Hope for a positive reply Your’s faithfully Minh Ky

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