You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear

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Smith, I am Tushar and I am the tenant of your apartment on

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Manchester street. I have a contract to live in your property until the end of the year and I am really enjoying my stay here with my family so far.

However

, there are a few issues with the condition of some of the furniture here and

that is

the reason I am writing to you. The furniture provided to us in the living room, especially the dining table and the chairs are quite old and shaky. I am afraid that these chairs are not safe for the use of my family, mainly my children and that these may break

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us. I would request you to either buy some new furniture for the apartment or get the chairs and the dining table repaired. I would really appreciate your help here to make me and my family feel safe in

this

otherwise

beautiful house. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Tushar

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7 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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