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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear
Mr.
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 Smith, I am Tushar and I am the tenant of your apartment on
the
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Manchester street. I have a contract to live in your property until the end of the year and I am really enjoying my stay here with my family so far.
However
, there are a few issues with the condition of some of the furniture here and
that is
 the reason I am writing to you. The furniture provided to us in the living room, especially the dining table and the chairs are quite old and shaky. I am afraid that these chairs are not safe for the use of my family, mainly my children and that these may break
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 us. I would request you to either buy some new furniture for the apartment or get the chairs and the dining table repaired. I would really appreciate your help here to make me and my family feel safe in
this
otherwise
 beautiful house. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Tushar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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