THE GROWING OF ONLINE SHOPPING WILL ONE DAY LEAD TO ALL SHOPS IN CITIES AND TOWNS CLOSING DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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The development of internet connection is being enormously effected to the consumer demand.

This

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can be even seen in daily shopping activities. To support

this

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refers to the speaker or writer

agreed that the

increasement

the act of enclosing something in a case

encasement

of online shopping will one day lead to closure all traditional stores in Cities or Towns.

This

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essay

will looking

Suggestion

will look

at how

reatail

the selling of goods to consumers; usually in small quantities and not for resale

retail

shopping shall be fading away

To begin

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with, the online sites provided the new, unique and convenient experience of shopping with a

mountof

Suggestion

mount of

diversity and huge products which quite satisfied to clients.

For example

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Amazone online shopping site

Suggestion

the Amazone online shopping site

has classified their items of goods

such

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as: clothes, laptop and computer, Phones, car, furniture and so on

then

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goods

Suggestion

the goods

shall be delivered to our specified address of the buyer. Consumers can save a lot of time for staying and

payment

Suggestion

paying

at traditional stores.

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this

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makes it clear that E-commerce markets completely meet the people requirement of shopping Another compelling argument that e-commerce business has a huge capital base and lower

managment

the act of managing something

management

cost.

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, Ebay company has invested and deployed a large number of drones for faster delivery to the customers,

moreover

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, retail businesses have to pay a more money for physical shops. These online shopping

business

Suggestion

businesses

are flexible in applying the new technology for consumer demand. As most would agree that model of website based-commerce markets will be rapidly developed with the support of technology in the near future. As seen above, the brick and mortar business shall be perished by expanding of new model of e-commerce. It is clear that the growing of online shopping will lead to the end of obsoleted commerce market.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

271 words

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THE GROWING OF ONLINE SHOPPING WILL ONE DAY LEAD TO ALL SHOPS IN CITIES AND TOWNS CLOSING DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many countries. Using of other sources like solar power are encouraged.

You had dinner with a family friend. Write a letter to your friend to say What you liked about the dinner Your feelings about their family Invite your friend and their family to your place

Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweight the disadvantage?