University education should be free to anyone, regardless of their income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Sir or Madame,

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is Hussein Mohey, and I am writing

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letter to expose my concern of your

sponsership

the act of sponsoring (either officially or financially)

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in my area. I have known about your project, so I decided to send you my feedback.

Firstly

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, if you can present support to the sports team, it will be beneficial, as the team here has problems related to funding,

however

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people here like soccer. It will encourage young children to participate in

sporta

an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition

sports

sport

clubs.

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, live concerts have not been established in

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area for about 10 years,

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there are many singers who visit our city every year. There are lots of talents who will gain

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benefits from

your

sposorship

the act of sponsoring (either officially or financially)

sponsorship

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. They will become real

super stars

someone who is dazzlingly skilled in any field

superstars

in the future.

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, I am of

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the belief

that you should spend your money through giving children the

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a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

chance

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to develop their talents by constructing a small

staduim

a large structure for open-air sports or entertainments

stadium

and a school

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for teaching

music with live concerts at night. Thanks in advance for your help, and I hope that my feedback is beneficial

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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