Some people believe, limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety, while other believe there are other ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
modern world,
mortality rate
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the mortality rate
mortality rates
due to
road
side
accidents
have increased
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has increased
10 folds than the past. It is argued that
limitation
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the limitation
of over speeds can play
integral role
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an integral role
integral roles
to
control
road
side
fatal accidents, while others believe that others immunity
measures
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measure
are essential for improvement of
road
safeness
.
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This
essay will discuss both views, my opinion and followed by reasoned conclusion On the one hand, over speed is one of the major
factor
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factors
for the
road
side
fatalities and by doing decisive measures we can improve the
road
safety
effectively. The
road
accidents due high speed vehicles are mortal because there are high chances of
intraabdominal
injury due to massive collusion to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
vehicles and stab wound due to sharp object.
Consequently
, mortality of passenger happens due to these massive injuries
.
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.
For instance
, in SaudiArabia
road
traffic accident is the major cause of death due to high speed
vehicles
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vehicle
collision
in
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on
the
high way
a major road for any form of motor transport
highway
.
Therefore
, by monitoring vehicle speed through surveillance camera and traffic warden and limit the
vehicles
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vehicle
vehicle's
speed in cities and motorways can effectively
control
the traffic accident and enhance
road
side
security.
On the other hand
, there are several ways to
control
the
road
side
deadly accidents which are as follows.
Firstly
, compliance of seat belt during driving
,
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which help to prevent counter collision head injury.
Secondly
, medical, physical and mental test before issue driving license will help to prevent
accident
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accidents
the accident
due to human errors.
Thirdly
, child
safety
seats should be
mandatary
required by rule
mandatory
, while driving
car
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a car
the car
cars
will reduce infant death rate. According to
survey
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the survey
a survey
surveys
, in London 50% child mortality has improved after
implentatation
the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
of child safeness rules.
Thus
, we should do other decisive measures to improve our
road
side
safety
. I personally believe that
in addition
to
control
speed limits, other
safety
precautions are
also
mandatory and I strictly follow additional
safety
precautions
such
as
use
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the use
of seat belts, follow speed limit rules to prevent
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
from catastrophe in the highways. In conclusion,
although
motor speed
control
is mandatory to improve
road
security,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
addition
rules
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rule
will
also
help to reduce
fatality rate
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the fatality rate
due to
road
side
disasters
.
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.
I strongly believe that both
measure
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measures
will improve
road
safeness.

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