Some people believe, limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety, while other believe there are other ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
modern world, mortality rate
due to Suggestion
the mortality rate
mortality rates
road
side
accidents have increased
10 folds than the past. It is argued that Suggestion
has increased
limitation
of over speeds can play Suggestion
the limitation
integral role
to Suggestion
an integral role
integral roles
control
road
side
fatal accidents, while others believe that others immunity measures
are essential for improvement of Suggestion
measure
road
safeness .
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This
essay will discuss both views, my opinion and followed by reasoned conclusion
On the one hand, over speed is one of the major factor
for the Suggestion
factors
road
side
fatalities and by doing decisive measures we can improve the road
safety
effectively. The road
accidents due high speed vehicles are mortal because there are high chances of intraabdominal
injury due to massive collusion to another
vehicles and stab wound due to sharp object. not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
Consequently
, mortality of passenger happens due to these massive injuries .
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For instance
, in SaudiArabia road
traffic accident is the major cause of death due to high speed vehicles
collision Suggestion
vehicle
in
the Suggestion
on
high way
. a major road for any form of motor transport
highway
Therefore
, by monitoring vehicle speed through surveillance camera and traffic warden and limit the vehicles
speed in cities and motorways can effectively Suggestion
vehicle
vehicle's
control
the traffic accident and enhance road
side
security.
On the other hand
, there are several ways to control
the road
side
deadly accidents which are as follows. Firstly
, compliance of seat belt during driving ,
which help to prevent counter collision head injury. Accept space
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Secondly
, medical, physical and mental test before issue driving license will help to prevent accident
due to human errors.
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accidents
the accident
Thirdly
, child safety
seats should be mandatary
, while driving required by rule
mandatory
car
will reduce infant death rate. According to Suggestion
a car
the car
cars
survey
, in London 50% child mortality has improved after Suggestion
the survey
a survey
surveys
implentatation
of child safeness rules. the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
Thus
, we should do other decisive measures to improve our road
side
safety
.
I personally believe that in addition
to control
speed limits, other safety
precautions are also
mandatory and I strictly follow additional safety
precautions such
as use
of seat belts, follow speed limit rules to prevent Suggestion
the use
my self
from catastrophe in the highways.
In conclusion, reflexive form of "me"
myself
although
motor speed control
is mandatory to improve road
security, other
addition any of various alternatives; some other
another
rules
will Suggestion
rule
also
help to reduce fatality rate
due to Suggestion
the fatality rate
road
side
disasters .
I strongly believe that both Accept space
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measure
will improve Suggestion
measures
road
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