Some people believe, limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety, while other believe there are other ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modern world,

mortality rate

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the mortality rate

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accidents

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has increased

10 folds than the past. It is argued that

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the limitation

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an integral role

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fatal accidents, while others believe that others immunity

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safeness

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essay will discuss both views, my opinion and followed by reasoned conclusion On the one hand, over speed is one of the major

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factors

for the

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fatalities and by doing decisive measures we can improve the

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effectively. The

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accidents due high speed vehicles are mortal because there are high chances of

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injury due to massive collusion to

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vehicles and stab wound due to sharp object.

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, mortality of passenger happens due to these massive injuries

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, in SaudiArabia

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traffic accident is the major cause of death due to high speed

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a major road for any form of motor transport

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, by monitoring vehicle speed through surveillance camera and traffic warden and limit the

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speed in cities and motorways can effectively

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the traffic accident and enhance

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security.

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, there are several ways to

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the

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deadly accidents which are as follows.

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, compliance of seat belt during driving

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which help to prevent counter collision head injury.

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, medical, physical and mental test before issue driving license will help to prevent

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accidents

the accident

due to human errors.

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, child

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seats should be

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will reduce infant death rate. According to

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, we should do other decisive measures to improve our

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. I personally believe that

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speed limits, other

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precautions are

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mandatory and I strictly follow additional

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precautions

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use

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the use

of seat belts, follow speed limit rules to prevent

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from catastrophe in the highways. In conclusion,

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motor speed

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is mandatory to improve

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security,

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any of various alternatives; some other

another

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help to reduce

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the fatality rate

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disasters

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I strongly believe that both

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measures

will improve

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safeness.

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