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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a plethora of environmental issues has been faced by the world,
such
 as deforestation, pollution, the greenhouse effect and depletion of the ozone layer.
However
, It is commonly believed that, these issues will be resolved with the advent of technology. Well, I totally agree with the statement and the reasons of my inclination are explained in trailed paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the latest inventions,
such
 as computers and electronic gadgets, have already started to save the earth. To be specific, the increasing
use
 of these devices reduces the
use
 of papers, which eventually, helps to discourage deforestation.
Further
, with the increasing
use
 of technology, people become more aware about the deleterious effect of some human activities,
such
 as the carbon emission to the
environment
.
Thus
,
such
 activities can be reduced.
For example
, governments can
use
 the social media, to spread awareness among people.
Therefore
, they will be aware and we can reduce the harmful effects to the
environment
.
Moreover
, as the biggest enemy of the bad
environment
 is the emission of harmful gases by using non-renewable fuels, the scientists have already invented the alternative of
such
 resources, by introducing the world, the power of renewable energy, nuclear energy and the electricity.
For instance
, the world famous automobile company, the Tesla has introduced a new car model, which can be run by using the electricity. Though,
this
 car is not yet for the public
use
, it is promised by the company that, it will be shortly available for the people. To conclude, even though, the future is unpredictable, the latest inventions of science make us believe that, it will surely help the
environment
 in the near future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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