Many People say that applying heavy taxes to industries will prevent industrial pollution. Other believe that there are other effective solutions to curb the industrial pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Include appropriate examples in your response, if necessary.

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Industries play a predominant role in polluting the environment.
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some people believe that levying high taxes to industries will prevent industrial
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, I believe that there are other implementable solution to stop the issue of
pollution
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emitted from industries. On the one hand, it is often claimed by some that imposing more taxes will reduce industrial
pollution
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as many produce products more than required demand for the benefit of profits gained by exporting the items.
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, if
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industries are
applied higher
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applied to higher
tax rates, especially large and medium scale industries,
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would deter unnecessary manufacturing of goods, and
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,
pollution
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can be controlled to some extent.
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to
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, for the small scale industries, if taxes are almost similar to the obtained profits, they will definitely think of continuing their business.
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, there are other ways to eradicate the industrial
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, in my opinion,
government
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ought to run campaigns to bring awareness at an individual level. Only when the consequences of environmental
pollution
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are understood, will the emissions from industries reduce. The other way is
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government
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the government
must ensure that the production of products should be based on demand, and must stop exporting goods to other countries.
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the sources that are used in the process of manufacturing will be automatically reduced. Water resources,
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, are mainly used in the cooling process of
steel industry
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the steel industry
, which would be limited if the production is reduced. The other most important way I believe is that higher authorities need to make a
pollution
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check on all industries, which means that if the given level is exceeded by any of them, there should be suspension of that particular company, not only will
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reduce the wastage from manufacturing companies, but
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will make them strictly to adhere
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in near future. To conclude, while imposing high taxes on industries will reduce
pollution
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from industries, not until
government
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start campaigns and perform checks on
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, will the issue be resolved.
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, on balance, I believe that
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government
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the government
may take suggested actions
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