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Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned do you agree or disagree?

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Plastic
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 waste
pollution
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 has been an issue that we are trying to tackle since a decade now, yet we haven't reached a conclusive solution for the same. In my view the
plastic
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 shopping bags have done much more harm than help, considering today's situations around the globe.
Plastic
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 bags are difficult to recycle and degrade, making it a prime catalyst in land and sea
pollution
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. We have seen so many examples where animals, not only on land, but
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 in the sea have been trapped, adversely affected and died, due to our
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 waste. Recent studies have shown that the effects of
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pollution
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 on the environment, in many cases will take years to reverse. Government authorities have taken various precautions in the past to reduce the effect, but the percentage by which it helps is way below the need.
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 of its various cons,
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 bags make our
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 to
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 life very convenient and a proper self-awareness among individuals can alleviate the harm to a good extent. Recently a city India adopted a policy through which
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 bags are issued only in specific cases and generalized use of the same was completely discontinued, forcing the people to use bags made up of the materials for their
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 to
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 use.
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 small changes, if implemented and adopted by the people can actually help us reduce the
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 made from
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 bags. In conclusion, I would like to say, the moment of small changes has passed and banning
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 considering the current
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 level would be help us start a cycle, where we would look for alternatives for daily needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
  • sustainable
  • mitigate
  • ecosystem
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • implementation
  • convenient alternatives
  • enforcement
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