Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in team, while other people think that take part in individual sports is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports play a vital role in our
life
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lives
.Some people believe that playing in a
team
is very beneficial while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
insist that taking part in games
indivitually
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individual
individually
is better.
This
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posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
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issue
agrees that
perticipating
taking part in an activity
participating
in
team
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a team
is
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
for students to development of their
career
.
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss both
point
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points
of views. Playing in a
team
is one of the beneficial
way
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ways
to develop
students
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student's
career
in near
future
.To build a good
career
students
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student
need to build some qualities in them
sothat
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so that
it can help to keep pace in their
future
working space.
Moreover students
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Moreover, students
also
can learn social manner.
For instance
,
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,
students
whom
the person or persons that; the one that
who
attend for playing in
team
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teams
a team
as like football
,
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cricket, they mixed with different people from
whole over the country
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the whole country over
.
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result they
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result, they
can learn how to talk with different people.It
help
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helps
to create compassion, social mannerism
,
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,
bonding
,
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interpersonal communication skills in them which are very essential quality to develop their
future
career
in working space with colleagues and clients
also
.
However
,
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,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
argue that playing
indivitually
apart from others
individually
in
game
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the game
can be important for students.Students who play
indivitually
apart from others
individually
can be more confident and self oriented person in
future
.But despite
this
it has some
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
negatives
impacts on students.
For example
,
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,
students who
plays
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play
indivitually they
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individually, they
individually they
become selfish and do not have any
cpompassion
a deep awareness of and sympathy for another's suffering
compassion
for others.
Furthermore
, they are only
concerened
feeling or showing worry or solicitude
concerned
about own profit oriented
.
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.
Consequently they
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Consequently, they
become rude and self oriented and do not learn social manner which really hamper their professional
career
life. In conclusion
,
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,
while
team
play has
important role
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an important role
for
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in
students
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student
students'
student's
life
,
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,
some still argue playing
indivitually
apart from others
individually
is better for people.In my opinion,
perticipating
taking part in an activity
participating
in
team
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the team
has opened a better
opportunities
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opportunity
for students to develop their
future
career
.

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