Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Making

money

from several ways/ career is different and persisting education at

right time

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the right time

has its own value,

however both

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however, both

points are valuable, and both should be debated before concluding.

To begin

with,

one

of my

friend

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friends

he always wanted to become a doctor and

one

fine day all his efforts/ hard work gave him what he really deserved; today he is running only his clinic and he is earning lots of

money

, apart from

money

what he has got is satisfaction. So, my point here is that he has only

one

source of income which gives him all what he wanted. Now, few of them believe that we should have different ways of earning

money

which is not

wrong they

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wrong, they

have

kindly

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kind

of talent or believe that they can achieve in their lives and education can be continued in future. I know

few

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a few

of my relatives who

has not continued

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have not continued

their studies, but they have

different source

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a different source

different sources

of income and I call them successful business.

However

, there are some advantage / disadvantage of having single or several ways of earning

money

. As mentioned above paragraph about

doctor

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doctors

the doctor

a doctor

. He has

single source

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a single source

of

money but

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money, but

apart of

this what

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this, what

else he has is time for family, peace of mind, healthy mind and

body but

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body, but

on the other hand

those who has several ways of earning

money

do not have above said points.

Conclusion, you can

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In conclusion, you can

have either

one

way of earning or several ways of

earnings

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earning

or you can complete your education now or

can be continue

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can continue

in future. The important part is that what makes you a good human being for family/ society. Whether it gives you happiness or it leads you to the busiest person. It must be chosen wisely.