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Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

#singer #-say #performance #-give #music #activities #-explain
Dear Arijit, I take immense pleasure in letting you know that you have been my favourite
singer
, since the release of your
first
 music album. I heartily congratulate you for your amazing live performance yesterday at the music concert held at Gachibowli stadium in Hyderabad. After watching your live performance, I felt that my dream has come true. Like many others, I feel privileged to get an opportunity to hear the famous
singer
 sing. Every song sung by you was breathtaking and left most of us spellbound. I loved your soothing melodious voice and can hear it for a lifetime. I am a trained classical
singer
 and have been learning it since I was 10 years old.
Also
, I am learning musical instruments like guitar and drums. I aspire to be a Bollywood
singer
 one day and I take inspiration from you every day.
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 would be really grateful to you if you can share some tips and
also
 give valuable advice on how to maintain the voice quality. Your valuable feedback is appreciated. Thanking you. Yours truly, Sasha.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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