Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

#singer #-say #performance #-give #music #activities #-explain

Dear Arijit, I take immense pleasure in letting you know that you have been my favourite

singer

, since the release of your

first

music album. I heartily congratulate you for your amazing live performance yesterday at the music concert held at Gachibowli stadium in Hyderabad. After watching your live performance, I felt that my dream has come true. Like many others, I feel privileged to get an opportunity to hear the famous

singer

sing. Every song sung by you was breathtaking and left most of us spellbound. I loved your soothing melodious voice and can hear it for a lifetime. I am a trained classical

singer

and have been learning it since I was 10 years old.

Also

, I am learning musical instruments like guitar and drums. I aspire to be a Bollywood

singer

one day and I take inspiration from you every day.

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would be really grateful to you if you can share some tips and

also

give valuable advice on how to maintain the voice quality. Your valuable feedback is appreciated. Thanking you. Yours truly, Sasha.

Thu Nov 07 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

179 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

The Closing

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In a number of countries ,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways lines for very fast friends between cities .others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport.

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