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It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spent it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are contrasting views of people that promoting healthy living to cure disease is better than treating the disease. Some opine that it is prominent to invest in motivating people to live a healthy lifestyle so that any
health
 disease can be avoided than to use public money to treat the patients. While I totally agree to encourage healthy living, I believe that treatment facilities are important too.
Health
 awareness is necessary among humans in order to secure our body from hazardous
health
 issues.
This
 can be achieved by investing in educating people about healthcare practices like hygiene, physical activities, fitness campaign, etc.
This
 will result in increasing knowledge of individuals
of
Suggestion
on
 how to take care of their
health
 and prevent
health
 related issues in the long term.
Moreover
, it will lessen the number of patients in society and reduce ill effects of spreading diseases. On the other treating the existing patients in hospitals is utmost important.
This
 is because if the infected people are not diagnosed and look after they will die and spoil the environment.
This
 will
also
 result in spreading the diseases in the society which will
then
 be again incurable and impossible to stop
this
 vicious circle. Again, it will become essential to spend huge amounts to prevent human beings from hazardous effects if illness in the long period. To conclude prevention is better than cure.
Therefore
, in my opinion, it is always better to invest public money in
health
 care and wellness programs and motivate people to live healthy and hygienic life, but not neglecting to mitigate the patients who are suffering from dangerous diseases like Cancer, AIDS etc.
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