Many office authorities impose a restriction on smoking within the office premises. Some governments have even banned smoking in all public places. This is a good idea but it takes away some of our freedom. What is your opinion?

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It is often argued by some people that their individual rights are snatched away when they are not allowed to
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in public areas, while there are others who welcome
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restriction. Personally, I believe that these types of bans should be implemented for both the benefit of the environment.
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, public smoking is bad for public
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.
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, when a person smokes outside a private area,
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other people are
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inhaling the toxic air which could be harmful for their
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. One of my uncles,
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, recently passed away due to lung cancer because of passive smoking. Because he always used to be around his best friend who was a chain smoker, my uncle had sadly been exposed to all the toxic air from the
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why, I firmly believe that more than individual freedom, the society's
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should be given more importance by strongly restricting
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actions.
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, smoking in public could be a bad influence for the
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generation. To be more specific, teenagers could look at adults who
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outside and may become eager to try it out.
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, my own cousin brother started consuming cigarettes at the age of thirteen. All
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was because he had been looking at people smoking outside and at a point, he had become desperate to try one on hi
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is why, I think that smoking outside of private spaces should be restricted or even banned for the benefit of the generation to come. In conclusion, I stand firm on the fact that anyone who smokes in public areas should be penalized for doing so, and that individual freedom is only secondary.
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is because the toxic air released from cigarettes could be dangerous to public
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, people who
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in public area could be a bad influence for young people like teenagers.

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