Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on TV such as the Olympic Games and the Football World Cup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Watching sports events on television is encouraged by many as they think that it promotes exercise among viewers whereas opponents of

this

viewpoint believe that other methods would be better. In my opinion, I support the la

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Suggestion

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oint because television has limited influence on humans On the one hand, those who believe that the mega sporting events motivate people to participate them in their real life,

this

is because the success and the fame of these sports stars mesmerise the viewers.

In other words

, when they watch these games on television, they realise that how fit these participants. Take any football star as an example, he can run, jump, and walk throughout the game without showing any exertion. By watching

this

, sports fans probably start to engage

such

games, rather just armchair enthusiasts;

therefore

, many supporters of watching the major sports matches promote unconditionally.

However

, despite the above argument, some people advocate that there are other options to be implemented to tackle

this

issue, and I strongly support

this

Firstly

, one possible solution is that the government funded campaigns, which creates awareness regarding the need of healthy living.

This

initiative has been used in various other fields and they not only reached to target population, but most of them were successful as well.

For instance

, spreading awareness of the significance of the physical activities would be created by giving some public talks by medical professionals.

This

education can

also

include many other subjects to attract the society: games, quiz, and storytelling. By way of conclusion, even though people are differed regarding whether viewing mega games on te

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as any positive impact on mankind's health status.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

275 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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