Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People often have a perception that accepting bad situations is good in certain circumstances, whereas others believe that
such
situations must be improved through our efforts. In my viewpoint, I would suggest that a person should work hard and enhance the situations rather than getting habitual to the things. On one hand, people always try to accept bad situations, thinking that the good times are yet to come in the future without taking any efforts. Indeed, if a person is doing an unsatisfactory job, they fear that crying over it will make them lose their employment. Even though the working hours are long, heavy workload and low pay, they believe that
this
job will help them to support their family expenses.
For instance
, most of the middle-class families are adjusting to all the circumstances which they face in their daily lives and
also
teaching the same to their children.
On the other hand
, changing the set of circumstances is very difficult, but possible, because humans have the capacity to make any situation turn upside down.
Moreover
, they might face troubles at the beginning, but eventually they will taste the flavour of success.
For example
, my friend was working in a start-up company for a low salary and faced heavy work pressure, but she wanted to modify her state, so she started attending interviews in other global and MNC’s.
Initially
she had faced a lot of struggles, but
finally
she got an offer in an MNC with a good hike and she is very happy. To conclude, we must “fight tooth and nail” to achieve our goals and turn our situations better rather than just accepting our fate, because our lives must be a role model to the younger generation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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