Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

As far as parenting is concerned, it is a significant responsibility of our life and not paying attention to that might have detrimental effects on our children.

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, it is argued that joining

training parent

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training, parent

courses is a beneficial practice for fathers and mothers to fostering their kids. I strongly agree with

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notion as well as in following I will explain my reasons about that.

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with, in spite of the parent’s tertiary education, there are some knowledge regarding

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the rearing

rearing

of children that they could not find it out without eye-opening experiences or learning as to that.

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, in

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courses organizing

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for parents,

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developed or designed for a special activity or function

specialized

persons give them elbow room to increase and update their wisdom

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on

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topic.

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, they will be able to deal with their children in the best way as well as when their kids become older, they will have a healthy mentality. Take the recent research as an example, American psychologist found that 82% of their

achievement participants

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achievement, participants

have regular and correct treatment during their childhood.

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, these sessions help parents get together and speak about different problems having with their children. So, they have a chance to learn about solutions

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various issues that they might face with in future.

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, if a child has some disorders in his/her school, the way that their parents solved

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issue is as a

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guide

for other parents in a similar case. In conclusion,

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parents are mature and wised individuals, when it comes to bringing up a child they

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definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

surely

sorely

need more information and training. In

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regard, I do endorse that these mentioned courses have a pivotal role in fostering children.