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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

#people #music #cultures #ages
It is often believed that the ideal way of bringing multiform people together is by
music
. In my own perspective, I agree enough to say the statement above is true due to
music
 can affect mood someone and unite people who might not know each other in advance. Some people feel in a good mood when they use
music
, either the artists who make a masterpiece with
music
 or others who listen to that masterpiece. Musicians mostly are not alone when they make a creation, particularly a kind of songs and arrangements.
Furthermore
, most of them are into the
music
. They are excited composing any sort of
music
, even if singing a song that another composer who creates that. They do not too much to think regarding where is the composer from or what is the composer tribe,
moreover
 only the skin. Only if the creation is suitable with the singer's voice, he or she will present it in a debut. It is
also
 applicable to the listeners that always enjoy and never being cared about the cultures of musicians whom both singer and songwriter have. They just can be fond of the effects of listening to the
music
 heard.
In addition
,
music
 can unite any people who are into it. It can build the relationship between
music
 lovers, even if they are strangers
first
. Albeit it has a different rhythm or colour, when a group of people listen to
music
, they only could be singing together eventually. According to the research, the doctors are using
music
 to their patients in the hospital since it helps them feel better in some cases. Another example is when two persons meet at an event, whereby there was a television or a radio plays some
music
 that they knew or woke up them from their moments and memories, they would be indirectly ended up singing or humming together. At
this
 rate, it is very likely for them to acquaint each other without thinking their colour skin or culture are different. In conclusion, I agree some people would be happy only by hearing, acting, or reacting to
music
, and it brings them to the new relationship no matter they come from, neither their tribes nor their cultures.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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