Technology has made man more social or less social, discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world
technology
has increasing
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is increasing
has increased
has been increased
constantly by human beings.Both have
important part
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an important part
in our life.According to my perspective, it is beneficial for country development. Every person have
attach
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attached
to the
technology
.A number of
man
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men
has
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have
more social using
technology
.
Firstly
,
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people gain knowledge about social sites and they create personal websites.Individuals get happening in society by social news.By
this
,
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people learn to new
technology
.In recent years
,
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scientists have search modern gadgets like as smart phones, laptops
,
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,
tablets so on.
Moreover
,
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in the past time people had not developed
technology
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the technology
.
Therefore
,
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dwellers do not educated in any field.
Furthermore
,
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youngsters prefer to electronics gadgets. Children do their
home work
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
easily and accurately.
some
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Some
children show their interest in entertainment and they create
account
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an account
and playing the games.There are many social apps like as WhatsApp, Instagram, Google,
you tube
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YouTube
youtube
and so on.
On the other hand
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some people
technophile but
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technophile, but
they busy in their work and they
do not using
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aren't using
are not using
don't use
do not use
have not used
haven't used
modern
technology
.
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.
It is
time saving method
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a time saving method
.
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Moreover
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,
few
people lack
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people, lack
of
noob
a circular rounded projection or protuberance
knob
and they do not habitat by internet.By
this
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they do not achieve success in work or study.In my opinion
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,
technology
has much better for
person but
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person, but
some limited of using
technology
is important.
therefore
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Therefore
,
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people do not get
misuse
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misused
of
technology
and people should respect of electronics things.In the future saving of
technology
will be increased.In
conclusion after
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conclusion, after
analysing all the aspects the pros of
technology
has man made more social rather than less social.
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