Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years
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problems and emergencies are the central points in reports of media than the positive development.It is thought by some that
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trend is harmful to individuals as well as
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.In my opinion, more of these activities create fear in common peoples mind but it alerts everyone about the surroundings.
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lot of problematic situations in the media reports generates a query in individuals. It means they are looking for those problems in newspaper or news channels to satisfy
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people talk more about the robbery
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parties and clubs than the general happy situations.
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people are
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mankind and good deeds are reduced.
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Crime
news, domestic violence reports
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a bad image
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unsecure every moment and that
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a bad impact
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to grow and prosper.
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, the fact of real bad situations aware people to protect them from it.
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exemplify, a hurricane warning spreads all over the country to save peoples lives and to prepare the situations before ahead. To summarize, emergencies and problems reported by
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the media
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have
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than constructive impact.But
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people to be conscious about surroundings and situations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pessimistic outlook
  • exposed to negative news
  • stress and anxiety
  • success stories
  • balanced reporting
  • well-informed public
  • rational decisions
  • sense of helplessness
  • apathy
  • skew public perception
  • mistrust in institutions
  • enhance well-being
  • mental health
  • manipulate public opinion
  • serve specific agendas
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