Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching?

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leaps and bounds, in future A.I. w

ill

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be taking over t

eacher’s job.

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the teacher’s job

I do not agree with

this

because

such

kind of fancy teaching needs a lot of money. Distance learning is very popular these days apart from classroom studies and

also

affordable. To being with, artificial intelligence w

ill be expensive compare

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will expend be compared

will expensive be compared

to teachers giving lectures to students.

Such

kind of computer programs needs trillions of investment to design and support staff to keep it updated all the time with sufficient amount of information which all institutes will not be able to afford and maintain it.

For example

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the principal

of Caltech u

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universities, says

if compared to lecture’s pay with computers, they do not even earn one fourth of m

oney which

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money, which

universities or schools spends on advance technology like

this

and teachers upgrade their knowledge of information by themselves, they are not dependent on anyone else.

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will not be replaced

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the future

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